Summary
The Double Edge of Globalization
The Double Edge of Globalization
Globalization is a major contributor to environmental problems worldwide. This is so because pollution of a country often affects world environment and the impacts extend to economic and social aspects. Multinational Corporations then took the blame for these pollution but without evidences that they are the main cause. Though energy-efficient technologies are available, the world seems clueless about how they could utilize them against global warming. At the same time, globalization is also seen as a double-edged sword. While globalization harms the environment, preachers are also using technologies to reach out to global audiences, advocating for conservation. However, evidence shows that global governance is more powerful in helping the world to evade this major crisis.
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Globalization is a major contributor to environmental problems worldwide. This is so because pollution of a country often affects (^) world environment and the impacts /extend to economic and social aspects(rephrase)\. Multinational Corporations then(red) took(Tense) the blame for these(wrong word) pollution but without evidences(word form) that they are the main cause. Though energy-efficient technologies are available, the world seems clueless about how they(Wrong word) could (Tense) utilize them against global warming. At the same time, globalization is also seen as a double-edged sword. While globalization(Avoid repetition) harms the environment, preachers(?) are also using technologies to reach out to global audiences, advocating for(red) conservation. However, evidence shows that global governance is more powerful in helping the world to evade this major crisis.(More powerful than ?) - I don't see how your final sentence is linked to the paragraph
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