Globalization
is a major contributor to environmental problems worldwide. This is so because
pollution of a country often affects the world environment and the impacts lead
to other economic and social problems. Multinational Corporations take the
blame for the pollution but has no evidence to prove that they are the main
cause. Though energy-efficient technologies are available, the world seems
clueless about how it can utilize them against global warming. At the same
time, globalization is also seen as a double-edged sword. While it harms the
environment, some people are also using technologies to reach out to global
audiences, advocating conservation. However, the most powerful method to evade
this major crisis is through global governance.
... Multinational Corporations take the blame for the pollution but has(wrong word) no evidence to prove that they are the main cause. Though energy-efficient technologies are available, the world seems clueless about how it can utilize them against global warming. At the same time, globalization is also seen as a double-edged sword. <>.
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